persuasive writing

 Dear mum

can i have a phone because i need it for safety 

I can text my mum and call my mum but when it is Christmas i might get a phone for Christmas and i can call my brother and i can play games with my brother or i cold get my mums phone if she gets a new phone Also when i go on the bus and my naan is not home i can call my mum to came and pick me up.  

And I wont go on bad sites and games the games will be for my age and i hope i get a phone.

from dante